Class Notes

Tuesday, April 26, 2016

Reading more Labors of Love today

Do not do undercover work in the profession – ask permission; camera is known to the speaker

Depends on the situation, though; if it’s on the street/public

NOTES:

Emma – Hudson Teacher

  • Make sure people know who a quote is from
  • Don’t use the word things
  • numbers under 10 must be spelled out

Julie – BASIC

  • Not necessary to say 1995 and twenty years ago, if you put the year that’s enough
  • Explain what programs are so people know
  • When you intro people you should tell them immediately who they are
  • 2nd mention of name should be just the last name
  • should write for the public/general audience
  • purpose of story is to spread a message

Marcus – Spinal Cord Injury

  • no periods in subheads
  • try to vary words
  • used the detour option; structure
  • do not use passive structures
  • complicated subject & did it well

Emily – Family fire

  • Apostrophes
  • topic amazing – hard hitting, though
  • mention the girl is at UNI
  • you forget the impact it makes on the family

 

 

 

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